Friday 19 August 2016

Descriptive paragraphs



Tour De France
Blistering hot I weave through my competitors as my feet pedal away. Spectators chant the names of who they want to win. As I glide down the narrow street a member of the crowd snaps his camera and the flash hits my eyes. Blinded, I carry on, Before I know it two people have already past me, I take a deep breath and I move my feet as fast as I could, soon I could just about touch the man in second place. Another burst of speed as more and more adrenaline pumps into my veins I pass the person in second. With one down and one to go I start to see the finish line.


Passing the man in second I carry on with the finish line just two hundred meters away. The crowd roars away, neck and neck we dart for the finish line I start to pick up speed and I am now pedaling as fast as I ever have. Before I know it I start to break free and get ahead of him with the finish line just inches away I pass it coming first, soon a crowd of people gather around me I gasp for air as cameras and microphones are shoved into my face. I scamper to the changing rooms for some relaxation as the crowd begins to grow, once I had tidied myself up I headed outside onto the podium the host had the trophy in his hand. He began to speak and subsequently he handed me the trophy, I held it up high and thanked all my fans then the crowd mobbed around me.

This week we have been learning about descriptive paragraphs these two paragraphs are inspired by this
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